"You cry?" asks Jack, softly, kissing along Kavinsky's jaw, down the hollow of his throat, as he rocks his hips, as he grinds down against him. "You'd tell me if it was because I hurt you, right? If something didn't feel good?"
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"You cry?" asks Jack, softly, kissing along Kavinsky's jaw, down the hollow of his throat, as he rocks his hips, as he grinds down against him. "You'd tell me if it was because I hurt you, right? If something didn't feel good?"